I have also changed the positioning of the main sell line and the information regarding it. I have made it bigger thus it stands out more in comparison to the rest of the text that is included on the page. I have rearranged the images on the right side of the magazine to move them further up therefore, leaving more room for the main sell line and it's information.
I have also removed the boxes from behind the images as I found that it secluded them from the rest of the magazine and made it looked more untidy and stopped the magazine from flowing nicely on the front page. As it was causing the front page to be messy, it would not appeal to the target audience as they would not like to buy a magazine that was untidy and unappealing as they would expect it to be the same way throughout the res of the magazine.

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